This was a short story I co-wrote with one of my best friends/big brother, Jeffrey Hsu [: We submitted it to our school's literary magazine, but it didn't make it. So here it is for anybody who wants to read it! [: WARNING: This is not for the faint of heart.
Oxford Academy
Wednesday May 4th, 2011
22:14
Dormancy is vicious; it’s ceaselessly waiting, always teetering on the sky-scraping edge of the world, eternally heralding life, and infinitely craving the painfully tranquil sleep. Dormancy is overpowering, undeserving, and a relentless murderer.
And thus, the night laid forever dormant, breathlessly escaping the sun and worshipping the crystalline structure of night. And on this night, that night itself plunged into a drowning dormancy, leaving the world unwatched and uninhibited; the world was free. As a chill, just a gentle silken chill, glided across the surface, the school was sleeping. It had shut down for the evening — but, this was fleeting, a brief encounter with rest. Startled into consciousness, the school howled salaciously, seething in earsplitting pain, as a pulse tiptoed on its unsuspecting spine. And here, on this night when everything was dormant, evil rose into freedom. Unlatched and released, its power is, ironically, finite — how long can it last before being ferociously quelled into dormancy? For that brief nanosecond, the evil crawled on its stomach and slithered into the school.
Oxford Academy – Outside Room 206
Thursday May 5th, 2011
07:37
Spring sunshine slithers in through the slashed shards, but nobody has discovered it yet. The clock cries out for help – TICK TOCK, TICK TOCK. Tiring of the pointless protest that ultimately drones on beneath the clamor and chaos on the other side of the remnants, it stops resisting, falling into its routine, melancholy step.
More steps join in, breaking away from the cacophony so familiar, into what used to be familiar. She hears the yelp of the clock, but it is cut off by the screeching of the PA system. She shakes off the foreboding feeling and goes to spritz some water on the house plants decorating her room. Finally she notices the jagged pieces of glittering glass dispersed sporadically across the floor. Not wanting to be blamed unjustly yet again, she quickly sweeps up the hazard and dumps it in the designated gray bucket before she trudged downstairs into the main office to report the unusual happenings.
“My windows are broken,” she bluntly informs.
“WHAT!? How did that happen?” they question furiously.
“I don’t know. They were like that when I walked into my room this morning.”
“The ones on the doors? Maybe somebody was trying to get in…”
“No, ALL of the ones except the ones on the doors…” she trails off pondering for the first time how the f**k all of the second story windows, which practically touch the ceiling, had managed to detrimentally implode into a supernova of glass specks.
Her thoughts are interrupted by the shrill cry of the bell, oddly similar to the yelp she heard from her classroom clock earlier. She turns her attention back to them and pushes the déjà vu away. They are regarding her with the same disapproving looks they always bestowed on her: the eccentric pariah and mischievous hassle in their eyes.
“Why the f**k did I even bother?” she thought to herself, “They never believe me anyway; screw it, I’ll be out of here in a year anyway. I have to get to my class. They’re probably crowding in the hallway.”
Oxford Academy – Room 206
Wednesday, May 11th 2011
23:51
As the wind bared its razor fangs and howled, room 206 was quiet. The students had all cheerily departed, she left the room at the appropriate time, and the night janitors systematically cleaned the rooms and returned home. It was night once again. The voluptuous curls of the brisk night swept the county, relieving the air of daytime tension. It was, admittedly, peaceful. That peace, however, aggravated the poisonous evil, pushing it to escalate faster and faster.
An eerie blush of purple-tinged evil subtly bordered the string of recently repaired windows in room 206, spilling through the glass and mystifying the peace.
Oxford Academy – The Science Building
Thursday, May 26th 2011
11:04
“Finally! The announcements are done,” praised Jeffrey in Mr. Steven’s cluster class, jeering at the fundamentally tireless quality of the video announcements.
Barely paying mind to the announcements, Vanessa cheerfully chatters with her peers in the light of room 206 and its newly furnished windows: “Ohmahgod. My birthday is actually tomorrow! Wow. I can’t believe I’m already going to be seventeen…”
The utility of the evil is massive. Now, dreadfully close to the climax of evil, the sunlight dances in the room and, though translucent, layers a transparent sensation over the room. It’s a sign of happiness that is, with asserted surety, going to fade soon.
The plants radiated a masked darkness. It was threatening, a slicing chill. At 11:15, the bell shrieked its customary cry and the students laughingly filed out of the classrooms. In room 206, she was sitting at her desk while Vanessa quietly collected her array of paintings and art supplies.
“How am I going to carry these? Okay, let’s see, I can hold this in one hand, this in another, that I can pile on top… I’ll stick this into my backpack, and…wow, this is heavy,” thought Vanessa. Unknowingly, she dropped a prime piece of her artwork. Sadly, the due date was today for the statewide competition, and this piece was her competition submission.
She, watching Vanessa scurry out of the room with her multitude of bundles, stared dazedly into the light. Sauntering to the back of the classroom to recover the forgotten painting, she placed it carefully on a neighboring table. As she walked back to her desk, the afternoon delirium set in and she continued munching on her lunch, slightly bitter.
Sooner than later, the bell that ended sixth period chimed with an oddly peaceful reverberation. The shriek had died.
As Jeffrey exited sixth period Viramontes, Vanessa arrived frantically crazed. She had lost the painting and it was due right then. Urgently pulling on his messily draped jacket, she dragged Jeffrey around. The bell suddenly rang, signaling the introduction of eighth period. There was a cadence to its twinge that was sinister, frightening.
The two climbed the stairs in a chipper mood. Entering room 206, they spotted the forlorn painting and visibly calmed down, collectively unaware. Vanessa ran towards it.
But, she never made it. The plants, overtaken by the mysterious wind, the evil force of darkness, had sprouted monstrous vines, veins of toned muscle. Tripping Vanessa, they silently, but with precise dexterity, captured the three.
Oxford Academy – Room 404
Thursday, May 26th 2011
23:58
Oxford Academy – Room 404
Friday, May 27th 2011
00:01
Oxford Academy – Just at school, in general
Friday, May 27th 2011
07:23
The atmosphere is tense as car doors swing open and backpack straps pad heavy shoulders. The students aimlessly step out and towards the school campus. Silence seems to engulf every millimeter of their numb bodies, but there seems to be chatter coming from within. They question how people could continue on like nothing happened when three were so unexpectedly missing.
As soon as they reach the edge of the threshold between the anguish and the anonymous, they come face to face with the cause of the clamor. The entire quad is flooded in flora – vines dangling from the trees, stairs, and roofs of buildings; leaves sprouting every which way with their faces gargantuan and moments from slapping bystanders in the face; eerily blooming buds that beckoned others closer without a single thought.
The inexplicable moment passes though and they shake their heads, trying to make sense of the new décor that seemed to bathe the school in an endless net of green. Could it be the senior prank? But how in the world could they have pulled off something so wild, so untamable – almost beastly? Where could they have gotten the time?
Time? It’s 7:50. And right on cue the shrill shriek of the bell bellows across the campus. The figures in the quad stir. It’s time for yet another tedious day. Less than five minutes to another lecture and mass of notes. Less than five minutes to an hour and a half to catch up on the sleep missed because of that late-night webcam session. Daytime: where all seems absolutely safe. The perfect time to get some sleep – but is it a sleep that nobody will awaken from?
Let the nightmare begin. The second shout of the bell echoes ominously as the second hand of the clock tremors and reluctantly hits 7:55 with its last murmured TICK TOCK-SMASH. All the windows across campus shattered, punched through by the greenery that had adorned and bordered the panes. The embroidered foliage gains speed, feeding off of the horror, shock, and confusion so dense that the air is choking with it.
Good story. The formatting was kind of strange and the last paragraph seemed like a humongous wall of text, but the language was quite excellently implemented and very original.
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